This version is a lot better than the other ones I heard you do. Now that you've fixed the vocals it sounds a lot better and polished. Good work.

Still a few minor issues with vocal placement. Really like the drums and percussion, and the saw synth.

yep I agree, but I only heard it when I relistened it today & put all my effects on the vocal on forehand, I should change the delay & reverb.And also when I am working 2-3 hrs on a track "I dont hear anything any more" I mean all starts to sound blurry (am I the only one who has this actually?) Didn't send it in yet. So I'll try to really get it right if I have time. And if you want I could give you a copy without the vocals?

oh, & thank you Fiziks for the encouraging feedback!